Every time I attend an author event, there is always the attempt to separate authors into the two camps of those who meticulously outline and those that write completely by the seat-of-the-pants, affectionately known as ‘pantsers’.
I sat and listened to the virtues of these two camps and decided that I am firmly planted in a third camp. I don’t outline every chapter, but I do like a road map. I consider my method more visual and less rigid than outlining, but, to continue the road map analogy, I don’t like to just get in the car and go in whatever direction the road takes me.
I do let my characters and their personalities drive within the conscripts of my loose road map, but I don’t confine them to one road. If they want to take the scenic route, I’m open to that.
So, how does this process work, I’ll try to lay it out for you the best that I can. I’m gearing this toward the writing of fiction. Non-fiction, in my opinion, works a bit differently.
Step 1 – Come Up With an Idea
Sounds easy, right. It’s not really. A good story has to have a great beginning. In this world of instant gratification and short attention spans, you’ve got to grab your reader from the beginning. I think we’d all agree that you need a good ending. Nothing is more of a letdown than investing your time in a book only to have an ending that disappoints. (Have you read The Firm).
The thing that writers struggle with the most is the middle (often called ‘the muddle’). If your book meanders off into dark corners and doesn’t recover well, you’ll lose your readers.
Make sure your idea is strong and has a strong second act.
Step 2 – The Mind Map
The mind map is a technique I’ve used in my consulting career to storyboard presentations, but it translates well to writing. It is a visual representation of your book that starts with the book title in a cloud in the middle of the picture and connected rectangles surrounding it. Each rectangle represents an idea which could be a chapter. I use one or two sentences in each rectangle to represent the main idea of the chapter. Here is a mind map that I used for my second book, Let Me Be Frank.
When I created this mind map, I left the chapter numbers off so that I would have the latitude to re-order them if needed. This mind map allows me to move into the next phase of building the novel seamlessly.
Step 3 – Set Up Your Tool of Choice
My tool of choice for writing is Scrivener. It’s an industry-standard tool and has some built in utilities that are very useful. The thing I like about it is that it emulates the old corkboard and index card method of writing about as closely as an electronic word processing tool can.
When I open up a new project in Scivener, I go right to the corkboard view and lay out my chapters just as they are in my mind map. Here is what it looks like from the same book.
You’ll notice that none of my chapters have numbers. Scrivener will automatically number them based on the order that I put them in on the cork board. In this view, you can drag and drop to your hear’s content.
I usually set up my entire book before I write. Then I can drill down into the next step.
Step 4 – Set Up Scenes Within Uour Chapters
Just like the chapter view, Scrivener gives me a scene view. As I write each chapter, I set up scenes within it. The scenes usually correspond with a change in the setting. They can be long or short. A chapter can contain a single scene or many. In my view, each chapter is a self contained story, or episode, within the book. A corkboard view for a single chapter is shown below.
I don’t want this post to be a commercial for Scrivener, but it’s the tool I use and if you’re wanting something that organizes your writing better than just a straight word processor, it’s worth checking out. Like the full book view, you can rearrange the cards on the corkboard to change the order of scenes.
Step 5 – Other Visualization Methods
As I complete each chapter in the book, I like to use other tools to see if I’m on track. One tool that I have talked about in the past that is a popular social media trending tool is generating a word cloud. Word clouds count how many times a word is used in a certain context and generates a graphic with the most used words in a larger size, more prominent color, or both. I did this with one of my detective books and was pleased with the result shown below:
In another example, I wrote a short story about a boy named Desmond that sells his soul to an evil character named Lou to become a great jazz pianist. The result is below:
There are several free Internet tools that will do this.
As for the steps that are left, they include things like:
- Finish writing your book
- Enlist the help of an editor
- Fix the things the editor finds
- Design a cover
- Market it
- Sell it
- Spend your riches
Of course, I will expand on many of these in future posts. Also, I have a book with many of these tips spelled out in more detail that is available on Amazon that you can get by clicking the cover below.
I look forward to hearing from fellow authors on the steps you use. Please comment as you see fit.
Great post, Don. While I go full-on pantser for my serials, like you, for a novel I tend to take a little of both. I developed my “system” early on and it works well for me — as long as I stick to it. I like what you’ve done here. LOL, but a mind map for my wrongly wired brain would wild and woolly. Hugs.
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Thanks, Teagan. I use the mind map as a map, but if my characters see an attraction off the road, like the world’s biggest ball of twine or something, I will take a detour.
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Reblogged this on Chris The Story Reading Ape's Blog.
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Thanks for sharing this, Chris
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Welcome, Don 😃
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Most interesting to compare and combine.
When I go into meticulous planning, my characters and situations usually give me a rude sign and go their own way.
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I can relate.
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Thanks for sharing this, Viv.
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You’re very welcome, Don!
Hugz on owl wings! @v@ ❤
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Reblogged this on anita dawes and jaye marie.
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Thanks for sharing this.
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What you describe, Don, is an interesting and dare I say it, controlled way of writing a book. I have trouble controlling my writing, as it leaves me in now doubt as to who is boss, but I do like the idea of a road map…
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The mind map is a guide, but it allows flexibility to take side roads.
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Reblogged this on Author Don Massenzio and commented:
Check out this post from my other blog with some helpful tips on starting that first book.
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Reblogged this on Anna Dobritt — Author.
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Thanks for sharing this, Anna
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I have done everything except the last point, Don [giggle].
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Reblogged this on Writer's Treasure Chest and commented:
Don Massenzio supports us by sharing his experience as a successful writer. Where do we start when writing our first book? Thank you very much for all your support, Don!
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Thanks for sharing this.
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It’s my pleasure!
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